Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Stop The Bulling

One after noon Alex sent a text to Alison saying "sand a cool picture to me". So she did not send it, but the next day in school every one was calling her names. Friday Alex told her again, but this time he told her that if she did not send it the kids in school wont stop calling her names and bushing her.Monday she had all ready sent it in wen she got to school the kids would not stop looking at her she run to the restroom. A  few minutes  pasted and the teacher walked in the restroom because she did not present to class. Alison told the hole story to the teacher the teacher told the principal and the principal told her parents. Alison moved to a different place and started a new life.

1 comment:

  1. I like how your story starts,but you got too much punctuation errors and need to check story before posting.Need more capitalization and your story has to much run/on sentences.

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